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he is a human;
she, a ghostly mirror
something sparked in them
people once said that
humans and daemons were not
to have relations
but they did, despite
not knowing it, even though
they'd each fallen hard
he was entranced by
her bubbliness, her naivety;
and she, his cold charm
people scorned them,
for such relations, a kind
the Guild approved not
yet their blossoming
feelings prevailed, bringing them
days of bittersweet
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"he was entranced by
her bubbliness, her naivety;
and she, his cold charm"
her bubbliness, her naivety;
and she, his cold charm"
This is by far my favorite stanza in this but I really enjoy it. I think your words
flow very well and that the haiku use in this way is very nice. At first I wasn't sure if
I would enjoy the fact that you sort of "completed sentences" in each haiku however
I find it worked out well in the end and was quite an enjoyable read. Nicely done.